Monday, February 22, 2010
Chapter 16 Response
Monday, February 15, 2010
Chaper 7 They Say I Say
This chapter without doubt helped me with my writing. Although with some papers, establishing why something is important is completely insignificant and will not help an argument at all, it is often needed in some papers. When writing previous to this I have simply stated the facts and built an argument, but I rarely state who cares or why it’s important. I feel as though this aspect of writing is often overlooked by many writers, teachers, and even professional writers. I believe including this in my research papers from here on out will drastically improve my arguments.
Monday, February 8, 2010
Chapter 4, They Say I Say
I believe this chapter gives very important information about how to write an argumentative essay. Up to this point my argumentative essays have simply been agreeing or disagreeing with a position, and giving a few concrete details as to why I have this position. Now I know that I must go into more detail and like I said before, “bring something new to the table”.
Tuesday, February 2, 2010
Chapter 9 Response
Chapter nine, “Big Organic” focuses the attention of the reader to realize that “organic foods” aren’t really as organic as they initially appear. The foods sold at stores such as Whole Foods where they market their products as organic, may mislead the customer significantly. The process of producing “organic foods” may start as organic but many other aspects go into the production of the food before it makes it to the store. These aspects include pesticides, shipping the food, packaging the food and many others. While these aspects are required to get the food safely to stores across the country, it takes away the organic aspect of the food, making these “organic foods” essentially inorganic.
After reading this chapter it has made me realize that although there is some thought that should go into what we eat, it may not make much of a difference whether we choose foods that read organic on the shelf, compared to inorganic. I have never been one to watch what I eat when it comes to organic versus inorganic, and this chapter has made me realize it really doesn’t make a significant difference. I found this chapter to be very interesting with all the explanation of how “organic foods” have, over time become drastically less organic.